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help me with this sentence [Dec. 12th, 2005|07:52 pm]
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A friend told me the word 'unparallely' does not exist. So I guess the sentence I wrote below is incorrect. Can anyone suggest another word with equal impact to replace the word 'unparallely' in the sentence below.

" My academic objectives, my life’s ultimate goals that I am unparallely committed to achieve and by which I steer the course of my life, encompass obtaining a medical degree,and specializing in pediatric medicine .

[User Picture]From: norajeans
2006-09-17 04:02 am (UTC)

I'll give it a Shot

My academic objective is to unfailingly commit to achieving the best I can and ultimately obtaining a medical degree, and specialize in pediatric medicine.

How's that? I know my English isn't that great.
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From: bookwormlab
2009-01-23 08:07 pm (UTC)

a hint

Well, if you wish the sentence structure to remain the same, I would advise to use the word "exceptionally" instead of "unparallely", which obviously does not exist.
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